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I'm still adding events to the timeline & cleaning, but this should be considered usable, for the most part. I didn't get any time to work on it yesterday & almost none today, and now I have to stop to sleep again. :( Better luck tomorrow, I guess. Oh & thanks for the quick feedback about the epic; I also prefer the short version. [[User:Dabe|Dabe]] 05:58, 16 March 2007 (CET) | I'm still adding events to the timeline & cleaning, but this should be considered usable, for the most part. I didn't get any time to work on it yesterday & almost none today, and now I have to stop to sleep again. :( Better luck tomorrow, I guess. Oh & thanks for the quick feedback about the epic; I also prefer the short version. [[User:Dabe|Dabe]] 05:58, 16 March 2007 (CET) | ||
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As you are working in this I didn't want to make a quick edition without making a clear notification. In the first paragraph, it reads: "Many ages ago" but in the third one, it reads "Many generations have passed". There's a time incoherence, 'cause many ages makes you think of a couple of centuries, perhaps thousands of years, whereas many generations make you think of couple decades. | |||
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I'm still adding events to the timeline & cleaning, but this should be considered usable, for the most part. I didn't get any time to work on it yesterday & almost none today, and now I have to stop to sleep again. :( Better luck tomorrow, I guess. Oh & thanks for the quick feedback about the epic; I also prefer the short version. Dabe 05:58, 16 March 2007 (CET)
Irving Rivas:
As you are working in this I didn't want to make a quick edition without making a clear notification. In the first paragraph, it reads: "Many ages ago" but in the third one, it reads "Many generations have passed". There's a time incoherence, 'cause many ages makes you think of a couple of centuries, perhaps thousands of years, whereas many generations make you think of couple decades.
